Epidemic+CHEESEBURGER

Epidemic CHEESEBURGER A great invasion is spreading throughout the nation. Innocent people are lured in to the alien hives – also known as restaurants – and given the unborn alien young – also known burgers – to eat and when they reach the victims stomach they expand, and the unsuspecting victim eats more, they get a horrible growth that spreads throughout the body. This infection is called obesity.

Obesity is when you eat too much fatty foods and you get heavy, wide, **__unattractive (Isn't this your opinion?)__**, and if you keep it up, you get**__(get or can get?)__** diabetes and many more diseases that may shorten your life span. Getting fat and losing it is very different. There are plus and minuses on each side. **__For being fat, you can scoff (slang) yourself all day until you're a single 40 year old living in a crummy apartment. But when you go overseas you have to get two seats to fit in, you won’t have many friends, and your self esteem is at an all time low.__** __**(All slang and opinion)**__

__L**oads (slang)**__ of **__kids (slang__**) have parents who are too busy (or too lazy) to make any homemade food, so they get takeaways every night and the kids and parents get very fat. Researchers surveyed 1,520 fat kids 9-10 and found out that they had decreased self-esteem. Decreased self-esteem led to 19% of the fat kids feeling sad, 48% of them feeling bored and 12% of them feeling nervous. In comparison 8% of normal kids (average weight) felt sad and 42% of them felt bored. __**Soon, this world will be a bunch of fatty slobs watching re-runs of //Friends// in a lazy boy if we don’t act fast.**__(__**Opinion**__) In the UK, 1.7million burgers are sold. We need to change that in to 1.7 million vegetables and fruit. Small groups such as **__s.p.a.r.k__** (Capital letters) and Project Energise have already tried to teach kids to be active, eat healthily, because you can’t have fun all day from playing PlayStation 3 all day.

I hope that if any obese people have just read this, that they have a second thought about taking another bite of that cheese burger.

By Max

//**__Miss Crawford - A great report, Max. Even though it is highly entertaining to read (would be a great speech), remember it needs to be factual.__

 Fixed  Epidemic CHEESEBURGER A great invasion is spreading throughout the nation. Innocent people are lured in to the alien hives – also known as restaurants – and given the unborn alien young – also known burgers – to eat and when they reach the victims stomach they expand, and the unsuspecting victim eats more, they get a horrible growth that spreads throughout the body. This infection is called obesity.

Obesity is when you eat too much fatty foods and you get heavy, wide, and if you keep it up, you can get diabetes and many more diseases that may shorten your life span. Getting fat and losing it is very different. There are plus and minuses on each side. **__ For being fat, you can eat all day on tasty cheese burgers. But when you go overseas you have to get two seats to fit in, and your self esteem will be low. __** Some of children have parents who are too busy (or too lazy) to make any homemade food, so they get takeaways every night and the kids and parents get very fat. Researchers surveyed 1,520 fat kids 9-10 and found out that they had decreased self-esteem. Decreased self-esteem led to 19% of the fat kids feeling sad, 48% of them feeling bored and 12% of them feeling nervous. In comparison 8% of normal kids (average weight) felt sad and 42% of them felt bored. In the UK, 1.7million burgers are sold. We need to change that in to 1.7 million vegetables and fruit. Small groups such as S.P.A.R.K and Project Energise have already tried to teach kids to be active, eat healthily, because you can’t have fun all day from playing PlayStation 3 all day.

I hope that if any obese people have just read this, that they have a second thought about taking another bite of that cheese burger.

__By Max__ **//